Oud 25-11-2015, 20:56
Hulpnodig
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Hoi,

Ik ben echt super goed in het falen en verpesten van het vak Engels.
Ik moet nu een report schrijven wat havo 5 waardig moet zijn en het is VERSCHRIKKELIJK geworden (zacht uitgedrukt).
Ik moet het morgen al inleveren en het is zeg maar voor een cijfer...
Kan iemand misschien voor mijn het gene wat ik heb gemaakt verbeteren of ervoor zorgen dat het een beetje fatsoenlijk is? Alvast heel erg bedankt! groetjes



Tablets are the future of schools

Before we get involved the ICT project the situation was boring and heavy on school, so we were very excited about the project.
The Netherlands are the best of the world with technology and they are the future of another countries. So it is a pleasure that we can use this technology at school.
After we starting with the ICT project, the government and our sponsor sent us school tablets. Each student has one tablet. The lessons are very different now. Everything is much faster and everyone can learn better by the tablets.
The tablets are perfectly for the students. They do no more heavy books to bring to school and they are easy to used. So they are very happy with the arrival of this technology. The teachers are very happy too, but sometimes there is frustration, because some of them are not handy with a tablet.
There are also things that should be improved on the tablets, for example the students can do games in the lessons, so maybe they can make a program or app so students cannot visit any site under the lesson and the battery is often empty so maybe can be a solution for that sought.

The tablets are positive for the school so I recommend it to every school in the Netherlands.

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Oud 25-11-2015, 21:17
Frankrijk
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Engels is niet mijn beste taal. Er zit zeer waarschijnlijk meer in. DIt haal ik er in elk geval zo snel uit:

- another --> other
- after we starting -> after we started with: nadat we begonnen met. Voordat we begonnen met = before we started with.
- by the tablets --> thanks to the tablets: dankzij de tablets.
- perfectly --> perfect
- they do no more heavy books to bring --> they do' nt have to bring heavy books anymore to school and the tablets are easy to use.
- handy with weet ik niet zeker.
- on the tablets --> for misschien??
- can do games --> can play games during the lessons
- under the lessons --> under lijkt me te Nederlands. Ik zou during zeggen.
--> de laatste zin is erg lang. Deel het in stukken, en zoek een ander woord voor " so maybe" , omdat het nu 2x dicht bij elkaar staat. Bijvoorbeeld: we need solutions for these problems.

Voortaan even iets eerder je bericht plaatsen. Dan hebben we wat meer tijd om er naar te kijken. Dit is wel erg kort dag he...
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Oud 25-11-2015, 23:36
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Dankjewel! hier heb ik wel wat aan.
Sorry dat ik het niet ieder had gevraagd, maar ik had het over het hoofd gezien.
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Oud 26-11-2015, 18:49
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*ik geef hieronder de tekst met de nodige correcties weer*
Tablets are the future of schools

Before we were involved in the ICT project the situation was boring and heavy at school, so we were very excited about the project.
The Netherlands are the best of the world with technology and they are the future of other countries. So it is a pleasure that we can use this technology at school.
After we started with the ICT project, the government and our sponsor sent us school tablets. Each student has one tablet. The lessons are very different now. Everything is much faster and everyone can learn better by the tablets.
The tablets are perfectly for the students. They do not have to bring heavy books to school anymore and the tablets.are easy to use. So they are very happy with the arrival of this technology. The teachers are very happy too, but sometimes there is frustration, because some of them are not handy with a tablet.
There are also things that should be improved on the tablets, for example the students can do games in the lessons, so maybe they can make a program or app so students cannot visit any site during the lesson, and the battery is often empty so maybe there can be a solution sought for that.

The tablets are positive for the school so I recommend it to every school in the Netherlands.
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