Diffused en I Spoiled it Myself (Lyrics)

[Glupa]

Ik heb wat nieuwe lyrics, waar 'k niet helemaal zeker over ben, of ze oke zijn en of er geen fouten in zitten. Dus misschien dat jullie zouden willen kijken:

Diffused

I've destroyed the most beautiful love I'll ever have
I've just cut of the biggest piece of my heart
I was waiting for something that'd never come
I was hanging on a dream you left behind long ago
I believed in something that didn't exist, anymore
I thought we were meant to be
I thought we were meant to be

I'm feeling naive and used
I should have known you got over this long before
I didn't feel we were getting so diffused
Why kept you saying how you love me
It got me confused

It'll make me sick when you're with another girl
It would get me so mad and sad
I think I rather forget everything we had
I was hanging on a dream you left behind long ago
I believed in something that didn't exist, anymore
I thought we were meant to be
I thought we were meant to be

I'm feeling naive and used
I should have known you got over this long before
I didn't feel we were getting so diffused
Why kept you saying how you love me
It got me confused

I already know
How I'll be waiting for you anyway...

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Bij deze ook al 'n kleine demo:
http://h1.ripway.com/Glupahost/ok.mp3

I Spoiled it Myself

You said there’s just too much,
That time can’t erase
I know, but if it ever would,
I’d wait a thousand days

Verse1
I wish I didn’t do the things I’ve done
I wish I didn't make the choices that I made
You say you can forgive but can’t forget,
That I was the one who made your hart bled like that

You said there’s just too much,
That time can’t erase
I know, but if it ever would,
I’d wait a thousand days

Verse2
I’m wondering if you could ever trust,
In spite of everything I’ve caused
You can’t love me like you loved me before
That I know, you say you aren’t sure

You said there’s just too much,
That time can’t erase
I know, but if it ever would,
I’d wait a thousand days

Bridge
I’m thinking about the fact,
That I spoiled it myself
I’m thinking about the fact,
That I spoiled it myself

verse3
You think my patience and love are a rush,
A temporary crush
I know they’re not, these feelings are really strong
And I have been thinking for long

You said there’s just too much,
That time can’t erase
I know, but if it ever would,
I’d wait a thousand days

outro
But I’m laying down the thoughts
The time has come to stop
And I’m giving up my hope
The time has come to let it go
Ant I’m laying down the thoughts
The time has come to stop
And I’m giving up my hope
The time has come to let it go

[botulismf]

I've destroyed the most beautiful love I ever would have had (oid, want als je het al vernietigt hebt, dan zul je het dus ook niet krijgen). Vergelijk het met 'zou' i.p.v. 'zal' in het Nederlands.
I've just cut off the biggest piece of my heart
I was waiting for something that would never come
I was hanging on a dream you left behind long ago
I believed in something that didn't exist, anymore
I thought we were meant to be
I thought we were meant to be

I'm feeling naive and used
I should have known you got over this long before
I didn't feel we were getting so diffused
Why did you keep saying that you loved me
It got me confused

It'll make me sick when you're with another girl
It will make me so mad and sad
I think I'd rather forget everything we had
I was hanging on a dream you left behind long ago
I believed in something that didn't exist, anymore
I thought we were meant to be
I thought we were meant to be

I'm feeling naive and used
I should have known you got over this long before
I didn't feel we were getting so diffused
Why did you keep saying how you loved me
It got me confused

I already know
How I'll be waiting for you anyway... (kromme zin)

[Glupa]

Die ik ooit zal hebben letterlijk vertaald. Want de liefde (Oh wat word 't k*ttig als je er zo over moet praten ) is vernietigd, maar blijft de mooiste die ik ooit gehad zal hebben. Dus ik weet niet zeker of ik dat zal veranderen.

That'd is gewoon 't korte voor that would klopt beter met de melodie die ik er tot nu toe bij heb.

Why kept you saying how you love me, is dat echt fout of vind je dat gewoon beter klinken? How naar that is iig wel beter idd.

It'll zelfde als that'd

Bedankt iig.

[botulismf]

Die ik ooit zal hebben letterlijk vertaald. Want de liefde (Oh wat word 't k*ttig als je er zo over moet praten ) is vernietigd, maar blijft de mooiste die ik ooit gehad zal hebben. Dus ik weet niet zeker of ik dat zal veranderen.

Hmmm ik vind het raar maar dat is mijn mening.

That'd is gewoon 't korte voor that would klopt beter met de melodie die ik er tot nu toe bij heb.

Klopt wel, maar ik vind het gewoon minder mooi klinken. Maar als het beter uitkomt met je zanglijn, dan kun je het wel houden. Al moet het ook wel te doen zijn om één extra lettergreep in je zanglijn in te voegen.

Why kept you saying how you love me, is dat echt fout of vind je dat gewoon beter klinken? How naar that is iig wel beter idd.

Dat is zeer zeker fout, dat is gewoon letterlijk vertaald uit het Nederlands ('waarom bleef je zeggen'...).

It'll zelfde als that'd

Er stond 'It'd', niet 'It'll', en dan heb je eerst een zin met 'will' en daarna een zin met 'would', dat zijn twee verschillende tijden in twee zinnen die betrekking op elkaar hebben, en dat is incorrect. Een vergelijkbaar voorbeeld: "Morgen zal ik wel even langskomen. Ik zou dan bonbons meenemen." Dat moet zijn (ik zal dan bonbons meenemen)

Bedankt iig.

Geen dank.

[Glupa]

Oke die feitelijke dingen zal ik dan iig aanpassen! Nog 'n x Bedankt!