*ik geef hieronder de tekst met de nodige correcties weer*
Personal comment : Thousands of children snared for sex blackmail
I am astounded that children blindly walk in this kind of traps.
*gebruik in een formele tekst geen samentrekkingen als I’m en dergelijke*
I am also shocked by the large number of victims. I cannot grasp children are so naïve. I do not know anybody who is snared by a paedophile. I would never undress in front of my webcam because every picture or movie stays traceable on the Internet. Many children who were ensnared, frequently visit public chat forums.
This can be avoided by informing parents about the dangers of the internet. In my opinion schools are responsible for this task. Parents can restrict such sites with a password, so children will not be able to sneak on chat forums. On most of the chat forums you can report abuse, in this way the abuser gets blocked on the forum.
*your is een bezittelijk voornaamwoord, get krijgt een -s omdat the abuser als derde persoon enkelvoud (he/she) fungeert*
I am definitely in favour of an age restriction, children below eighteen years are not allowed to visite this kind of websites.
*"ergens voor zijn" wordt vertaald als "to be in favour of something", visited is de verleden tijdsvorm van to visit*
Schools need to have a better counselling program for children who were groomed for online abuse. These children mostly need mental counseling and their parents as well. It is not easy to accept that their children were ensnared by a paedophile. This kind of perpetrators need to be placed into institutes where they obtain special counseingl for their problem. Because this kind of infraction is not allowed in our modern society, they will also have to go to jail. But only if they are declared mentally healthy by the institute.
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