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Iemand tijd voor Engels mini artikel te controleren ?

Hallo,

Ik hoop dat er iemand is die mijn artkel wil controleren, alvast bedankt!

The big shoe mystery

There washed ashore ten thousands of shoes on the seaside three weeks ago at Terschelling. That was something else than a piece of wood, fuel oil, empty bottles and other mess. There will be talk about this story for years on the Dutch Wadden.

A ship, the P&O Nedlloyd Mondriaan, lost during a storm in front of Terschelling 58 containers on Thursday evening, 9 February. The riot police watched over the cargo. The riot police came from Harlingen, because there wasn’t enough police at Terschelling.

Twelve containers were washed on the island Terschelling, 46 sank to the bottom of the sea. The contents of the containers were hamburgers, corn beef, toy, aluminium cases, shoes, and hammers. One container burst open, that’s why the coast was full with shoes.

The loose stuff was for the happy founder. The beachcombers seized the opportunity. With wheelbarrows, trailers and big shopping bags the islanders were looking for shoes. The school was closed in the afternoon, everybody was at the beach.

Some inhabitants have a whole shed full with plimsolls and other shoes. There is plenty trade and barter. But there are too much shoes for Terschelling. The tourists amuse themselves for hours with searching for right shoes.

After a cleaning action from ten days the seaside is completely free of all the stuff. With a lot of effort of all sorts of companies the seaside is cleaned. They used so-called beach sweepers. They brought all the waste to a waste-disposal in Harlingen. The nine closed containers are transported to the land. The owners of the containers will decide what they are going to do with the property.

Ik heb wederom een Engels artikeltje

Misschien dat iemand dit artikel wil nakijken ?
Dank je!

Britisch boy (14) is charged for murder

LONDON- A fourteen year old British boy is official charged for a murder to a three year younger schoolmate. The boy was arrested quickly after there was found mortal remains of the eleven year old Joe Geeling in a park. The boy died by means of a lot of stab wounds. The suspected- the son of a policeman- dumped the dead body in an organic waste bin and transported to a park near by his house.

Joe Geeling disappeared on his way from school to his house. His dead body was found hidden under twigs, leafs and construction materials in a ditch in the Whitehead Park.

Wordt het nu niet tijd om zelf je huiswerk te maken?

Ik heb je topics maar even samengevoegd. Het is niet de bedoeling dat je voor elke nieuwe tekst een nieuw topic opent.

Citaat:

zuster schreef op 07-03-2006 @ 17:18 :
Wordt het nu niet tijd om zelf je huiswerk te maken?

Ach, ik heb dit liever dan:

"hoi ik ben piet en ik sit in 6vwo en ik moet een stukje sgrijven vor nederlands mar heb geen sin om het e make heefd iemant misgien nog die opdragt van blz 42 oke dank je doei"

Hallo,

Sorry dat ik twee keer een topic had gemaakt, niet bij nagedacht.
En ik heb mijn huiswerk gemaakt. Ik vraag alleen als er iemand is die wil helpen om het even te controleren op fouten die ik zelf niet zie enz. Gewoon voor extra controle!

Citaat:

JoniB schreef op 07-03-2006 @ 18:13 :
Hallo,

Sorry dat ik twee keer een topic had gemaakt, niet bij nagedacht.
En ik heb mijn huiswerk gemaakt. Ik vraag alleen als er iemand is die wil helpen om het even te controleren op fouten die ik zelf niet zie enz. Gewoon voor extra controle!

Precies, niets mis mee.

British boy (14) charged for murder

LONDON-
A fourteen years old British boy has officially been charged for murdering a three year younger schoolmate. The boy was arrested quickly after the body of the eleven years old Joe Geeling was found in a park. The boy was stabbed to death. The suspect- son of a policeman- dumped and transported the dead body in an organic waste bin to a park nearby his house.

Joe Geeling disappeared on his way from school to his house. His dead body was found hidden under twigs, leafs and construction materials in a ditch in the Whitehead Park.

Zoiets.

Citaat:

Levitating Nun schreef op 07-03-2006 @ 18:46 :
British boy (14) charged for murder

LONDON-
A fourteen years old British boy has officially been charged for murdering a three year younger schoolmate. The boy was arrested quickly after the body of the eleven years old Joe Geeling was found in a park. The boy was stabbed to death. The suspect- son of a policeman- dumped and transported the dead body in an organic waste bin to a park nearby his house.

Joe Geeling disappeared on his way from school to his house. His dead body was found hidden under twigs, leafs and construction materials in a ditch in the Whitehead Park.

Zoiets.

Volgens mij is het "fourteen year old" zonder die s achter year dus.

Citaat:

JoniB schreef op 07-03-2006 @ 16:12 :

The big shoe mystery

Ten thousands of shoes were washed ashore on the seaside three weeks ago at Terschelling . That was something else than pieces of wood, fuel oil, empty bottles and other mess. There will be talked about this story for years on the Dutch Wadden.

A ship, the P&O Nedlloyd Mondriaan, lost 58 containers during a storm in front of Terschelling Thursday evening, on the 9th of February . The riot police watched over the cargo. They came from Harlingen, because there were not enough police at Terschelling.

Twelve containers were washed ashore on the island Terschelling, 46 sank to the bottom of the sea. The contents of the containers were hamburgers, corn beef, toy, aluminium cases, shoes, and hammers. One container burst open, that’s why the coast was full with shoes.

The loose items were for the happy founder. The beachcombers seized the opportunity. With wheelbarrows, trailers and big shopping bags the islanders were looking for shoes. The school was closed in the afternoon, everybody was at the beach.

Some inhabitants have a whole shed full with plimsolls and other shoes. There is plenty trade and barter. But there are too much shoes for Terschelling. The tourists amuse themselves for hours with searching for right shoes.

After a cleaning action of ten days the seaside is completely free of all the mess. With a lot of effort of all sorts of companies the seaside is cleaned. They used so-called beach sweepers. They brought all the waste to a waste-disposal in Harlingen. The nine closed containers are transported to the land. The owners of the containers will decide what they are going to do with the property.

En dit ging erover dat er alleen linkerschoenen waren?
Je zegt maar in één zin ("The tourists amuse themselves for hours with searching for right shoes. ") dat ze zochten naar rechterschoenen en voor de rest wordt dat ook niet duidelijk. Right hoeft ook geen rechts te betekenen.

Of zit ik nu fout en ging het helemaal niet over dat artikel? :bloos:

Heej,

Bedankt alle!
Ik heb mijn stukjes ingeleverd, dus op zich kunnen deze tekstjes van de site, moet nog wel even kijken hoe ik dat moet doen!

Dat artikel ging niet alleen over minder linker schoenen, juist niet. Dat verhaaltje staat er niet bij! Had er ook bij gekund. Nee, ging meer over dat er zoveel containers waren aangespoeld :)

Citaat:

mcflem schreef op 07-03-2006 @ 21:50 :
En dit ging erover dat er alleen linkerschoenen waren?
Je zegt maar in één zin ("The tourists amuse themselves for hours with searching for right shoes. ") dat ze zochten naar rechterschoenen en voor de rest wordt dat ook niet duidelijk. Right hoeft ook geen rechts te betekenen.

Of zit ik nu fout en ging het helemaal niet over dat artikel? :bloos:

Haha, 'right shoes' kan ook 'goede schoenen' zijn. Schoenen die de toeristen passen, bijvoorbeeld.

uhmm...whaha...dat bedoelde ik dus eigenlijk... :D
De goede schoenen bij elkaar vinden, niet perse rechterschoenen vinden, ik bedoelde de 'juiste' schoenen..zoiets! :p

Bla!
(we gaan hier geen links naar porno-achtige sites plaatsen :nono: )