the Distance
 

Aan: Liekedepieke


Eventhough distance
has come between us

and both of us found
a way to live on without
eachother

Eventhough I behaved
like a fool
you must know
I do care for
you....


Mik

Lief, kort maar krachtig :)
Engelse gedichtjes vind ik sowieso mooier.
Ook nog bedankt voor jouw reactie!
Liefs, Kronkel.

I guess that's about me... :p

I'm not going to discuss the meaning of the poem here because we both have our own opinions on it which don't match :( , although you say you understand...

But the poem itself is okay :) , maybe you can change the last line, put the 'for' a line above so it's in the same form as you did with the second paragraph.... just a suggestion...

x Lieke