12-11-2002, 18:42
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Aan: Liekedepieke
Eventhough distance has come between us and both of us found a way to live on without eachother Eventhough I behaved like a fool you must know I do care for you.... Mik
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12-11-2002, 22:46
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Lief, kort maar krachtig
 Engelse gedichtjes vind ik sowieso mooier. Ook nog bedankt voor jouw reactie! Liefs, Kronkel.
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13-11-2002, 04:48
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I guess that's about me...
 I'm not going to discuss the meaning of the poem here because we both have our own opinions on it which don't match  , although you say you understand... But the poem itself is okay , maybe you can change the last line, put the 'for' a line above so it's in the same form as you did with the second paragraph.... just a suggestion...x Lieke
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