beetje zomaar

Ik heb dit maar een beetje zomaar geschreven, maar ik vraag me af of het klopt of waar het niet klopt. Oh ja, het is engels.

Later, come knocking
telling me
I must go to heaven
where are lovers
and are we cryers?
is this all but not totally?
can you bless, and fall away
come here stay
light my way
free your mind of speaking
release a heart
come drift my wings
they’re torn apart
so here i ask can i receive
is this some loving
or should we bleed
here i commend
and reconsider
to hold a hand, or mine
when is this landscape all
why are the seas torn in two?
oh how I belong
to you
so dream away can’t stay
here if i may
to bless again
and dream away