21-05-2005, 20:49
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You said I love you,
you meant: I have loved you you said I'll try, you meant: it's too late. You said I'll never let you go, You meant: soon I'll be gone. Everything you've said, I believed Everytime you lied, I believed Everytime you've said, You're the only one I should have known, That you meant: I love you, But I love the others to...
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...Addicted to your attention...I Just want you and nobody else...
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21-05-2005, 21:00
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You said I love you,
you meant: I have loved you you said I'll try, you meant: it's too late. You said I'll never let you go, You meant: soon I'll be gone. Everything you've said, I believed Everytime you lied, I believed (you) Everytime you've said, You're the only one I should have known, That you I love you, But I love the others too...
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I'M NOT YOUR MOTHER'S FAVORITE DOG
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21-05-2005, 22:52
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Niet negatief bedoeld, maar ik zou het in het Nederlands proberen. Ik denk dat je dan een beter gedicht zou krijgen.
 Het gedicht vind ik nu te simpel en er staat (als af mag gaan op de post van CSN) aardig wat foutjes in.
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