[en] kunnen jullie dir nakijken

[halilo]

hejj hai ik heb de volgende tekst voor een vriendin geschreven kunnen jullie het aub nakijken en verbeteren

alvast bedankt,










Hello, my name is Anet and I'm 19 years old. I'm living in Holland for 5 years now. I've got a greece nationality and I was born in Konya. I lived in Konya with my mother, my two little brothers, one big brother and 2 sisters. I also had some uncles, aunts and a granddad. My dad went to Holland to earn money.
I was a very naughty child. If people saw me coming, they would head to the other side of the road, even people older than me. I often hurt them. I can recall it very clear, I was at my grandpa's and some children were yelling outside. My grandpa asked me If I could tell to go away. I did... but they didn't listen. Then I picked up a rock and threw it at a boy called Yasar. He sustained a serious head wound. But this wasn't the first time I experienced something like this. I once threw rocks at my uncle and my brother too.
My mother allowed me to play outside for the entire day. I didn't have many girlfriends. My only friends were some boys. I looked like a boy actually, with short hair and stuff. People always asked me whose son I was. But I was 4 or 5 years old then. When I was older, my dad told us we had to come to Holland. In Holland everything was different. I was to old to go to grounding school or to a Stofra. I had to go to college but a lady from grounding school told my dad it would have been very hard to me If I went to Erasmus because of all the Turkish children there (so I wouldn't be able to learn proper dutch). So actually I didn't have much chance to study. Later I had to go to Twenteplus. There I studied Taab and after that I went to Gravenvoorde to study healthcare. Everybody just decided what I had to do. It really was a shame that I couldn't decide for myself what I liked to do for my future. I would really have wanted to study and change and improve myself. I'm now studying Spw2 and I really like this course. I think my class mates are nice people. I can understand much more now and everybody can now understand me too. But I'm a really sensitive person. I'm quickly offended when people start to yell at me. I'm now often more in the mood to do things for school. I would like to practice my hobbys such as painting and drawing. My weak spot is that I can't make friends that quick anymore. It should be somebody who is special, somebody from my class maybe. But I have got much friends now. Sometimes they can give me a real headache, but I can now really hang around with people. My wish is to continue stuyding and that I everybody will become healthy and happy.

[Liesjeuh]

[QUOTE]halilo schreef op 19-09-2005 @ 20:28 :
[B]Hello, my name is Anet and I'm 19 years old. I've been living in Holland for 5 years now. I've got the Greek nationality and I was born in Konya.
...
My grandpa asked me If I could tell them to go away.
...
My mother allowed me to play outside the entire day. I didn't have many girlfriends.
...
I was too old to go to grounding (wat is dat?) school or to a Stofra. I had to go to college but a lady from grounding school told my dad it would be very hard for me
En hier stop ik, de rest kan ik eventueel morgen nog nakijken.

[Liesjeuh]

halilo schreef op 19-09-2005 @ 20:28 :
...very hard for me if I would go as an Erasmus student, because of all the Turkish children there (so I wouldn't be able to learn proper Dutch).
...
...I couldn't decide for myself what I liked to do for (in?) my future. I really wanted to study and change and improve myself.
...
...I can't make friends that quick anymore. A friend ('friends' is meervoud, dus kan je daar niet naar verwijzen met "it") should be somebody who is special, somebody from my class maybe. But I have got many friends now. Sometimes they can give me a real headache, but now I can really hang around with people. My wish is to continue studying and that everybody will become healthy and happy.

[halilo]

thnx schat

[Falbala]

Weet niet of ik nog op tijd ben, maar voor de zekerheid.


Hello, my name is Anet and I'm 19 years old. I'm living in Holland for 5 years now. I've got a greeK nationality and I was born in Konya. I lived in Konya with my mother, my two little brothers, one big brother and 2 sisters. I also had some uncles, aunts and a granddad. My dad went to Holland to earn money.
I was a very naughty child. If **WHEN** people saw me coming, they would head to the other side of the road, even people older than me. I often hurt them. I can recall it very clear **CLEARLY**, I was at my grandpa's and some children were yelling outside. My grandpa asked me If I could tell **THEM** to go away. I did... but they didn't listen. Then I picked up a rock and threw it at a boy called Yasar. He sustained a serious head wound. But this wasn't the first time I experienced something like this. I once threw rocks at my uncle and my brother too.
My mother allowed me to play outside for the entire day. I didn't have many girlfriends. My only friends were some boys. I looked like a boy actually, with short hair and stuff. People always asked me whose son I was. But I was 4 or 5 years old then. When I was older, my dad told us we had to come to Holland. In Holland everything was different. I was to old to go to grounding school or to a Stofra. I had to go to college but a lady from grounding school told my dad it would have been very hard to me If I went to Erasmus because of all the Turkish children there (so I wouldn't be able to learn proper dutch). So actually I didn't have much chance to study. Later I had to go to Twenteplus. There I studied Taab and after that I went to Gravenvoorde to study healthcare. Everybody just decided what I had to do. It really was a shame that I couldn't decide for myself what I liked to do for my future. I would really have wanted to study and change and improve myself. I'm now studying Spw2 and I really like this course. I think my class mates are nice people. I can understand much more now and everybody can now understand me too. But I'm a really sensitive person. I'm quickly offended when people start to yell at me. I'm now often more in the mood to do things for school. I would like to practice my hobbys **HOBBIES**such as painting and drawing. My weak spot is that I can't make friends that quick anymore. It should be somebody who is special, somebody from my class maybe. But I have got much friends now. Sometimes they can give me a real headache, but I can now really hang around with people. My wish is to continue stuyding and that I everybody will become healthy and happy.

[Liesjeuh]

If people saw me coming... is ook ok hoor

[Nick-Name]

Liesjeuh schreef op 21-09-2005 @ 14:14 :
If people saw me coming... is ook ok hoor

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