11-12-2001, 14:57
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Ik moest voor engels een persoonlijke brief schrijven...heeft iemand nog op/aanmerkingen op onderstaande brief???
------------------------------------------ IJsselmeerlaan 82 8304 DB Emmeloord The Netherlands Tuesday, 2 October 2001 Dear Tommy, I have read about Jörg Haider and his political view, which is extreme right-wing. I would like to know what your opinion on it is. I have been planning to go to Austria in my summer holidays, but I am not sure any more if that is the right thing to do. But on the other hand, my girl friend lives in Austria and I really want to meet her. Did I tell you? I met her during my last holidays in the United States. Last week I went to my grandmother in the city of Amersfoort. I went there by train, but on my road back my train had a delay. But that delay caused me to miss my bus. It was the last bus to my home. I had to take a taxi home, which cost me about 135 guilders. I hope to hear from you soon, Take care, Martijn van der Laan
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11-12-2001, 15:21
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"It was the last bus to my home"
Vind ik nogal raar klinken. Kun je "my home" niet verwisselen met de plaats waar je woont? Verder, is het in een informele brief nodig om alle vormen voluit te schrijven (I am, it is)? Ik dacht dat dat alleen bij een formele brief moest. Love
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11-12-2001, 15:25
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8304 DB Emmeloord The Netherlands Hoeft niet bij een informele brief Tuesday, 2 October 2001 Dear Tommy, I have read about Jörg Haider and his political views, which is extreme right-wing. I would like to know (your opinion on this matter). I have been planning to go to Austria in my summer holidays, but I am not sure any more if that is the right thing to do. But on the other hand, my girl friend lives in Austria and I really want to meet her. Did I tell you? I met her during my last holidays in the United States. Last week I went to my grandmother in the city of Amersfoort. I went there by train, but on my road back (it) had a delay. And that delay caused me to miss my bus. It was the last bus --- home. I had to take a taxi (cab?) home, which costed me about 135 guilders. --- Take care, Martijn van der Laan Ik weet dat ik altijd veel verbeter, maar je kunt ff kijken wat je doet... Als iets tussen haakjes staat, is het op zich niet fout, maar zou ik het zo doen 
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11-12-2001, 16:20
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IJsselmeerlaan 82
Volgens mij moet het adres na het huisnummer.. dus 82 IJsselmeerlaan...
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11-12-2001, 16:49
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11-12-2001, 16:53
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11-12-2001, 17:10
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 Toch is het vaag... ik zal het opzoeken, als ik daar zin in heb...Love
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11-12-2001, 18:05
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I hope to see my friend, and shake his hand. I hope the Pacific is as blue as it has been in my dreams. I hope.
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12-12-2001, 14:13
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8304 DB Emmeloord The Netherlands Tuesday, 2 October 2001 Dear Tommy, Having read about Jörg Haider and his extreme right-winged political view, I would like to know your opinion concerning this. I have thought of going to Austria in my summer holidays, but I am not sure any more if that is the right thing to do. Though, on the other hand, my girl friend lives there and I really want to meet her. Did I tell you how we met? It was during my last holidays in the United States. (vertel hier iets meer over )Last week I went to my grandmother in the city of Amersfoort. I went there by train, but on my way back the train I had to take had a delay. Because of this I missed my bus. Unfortunately that bus was the last one driving that day, thus I had to take a taxi home which costed me about 135 guilders. Hope this bad experience with the Dutch Railywas will be my last one! I hope to hear from you soon, Take care, Martijn van der Laan Erm,.. het was een geintje dat van die Nederlandse spoorwegen, maar ik kon het even niet laten Ik heb best veel veranderd, maar dat hoeft natuurlijk niet goed te zijn! Groetjes, Suzan
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12-12-2001, 14:17
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Cab is Amerikaans Taxi-cab kan ook. Groetjes, Suzan
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12-12-2001, 14:19
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12-12-2001, 14:51
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Iedereen bedankt voor zijn hulp, maar verbeteringen aanbrengen hoeft niet meer. Ik heb hem nl. al ingeleverd..
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I hope to see my friend, and shake his hand. I hope the Pacific is as blue as it has been in my dreams. I hope.
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