Lost in the world

Two people, lost in the world
Tortured by one another
They never wanted to admit
They couldn't live without each other

Two people, lost in the world
Slowly dying in toxic air
The whole planet sufficating
Suffering from the mistakes once made

Two people, lost in the world
The one like day, the other night
Once warriors for a better life
Now only waiting for their end

Two people, lost in the world
Struggling against their feelings long gone
Giving up hope for a better life
Waiting for death to finally strike

Two people, lost in the world
Eating the only peaches left
Choosing to kill each other
Refuse to wait for lonely death

Two people, lost in the world
Finally finding the peace
That was once denied them
They found the way in the long run

Blagh, heb net een verhaal op internet gelezen, was best wel onder de indruk, en probeerde dit uit. Geen geslaagd experiment dus, maar toch maar plaatsen. En jah, ik weet dat er geen duidelijke rijm/lijn/verhaal in zit... *rolt ogen*

[Cinamon]

dus het gedicht is WEL van jou?
cool

ik zit nu zo van: "hallo hee... lekker dan!"
and i mean that in a (REALLY) good way...
ik herken er iets in... van mezelf eigelijk... beetje raar maar waar
dit stukje namelijk:
Two people, lost in the world
Struggling against their feelings long gone
hoezow blagh?? do not get the picture...
maar wel de story... (i think)

xxx

ps. *haalt schouders op*