Ik wilde weer eens wat

[Snakeboy]

Ben even uit verveling wat wezen typen,
Even kijken wat jullie ervan vinden..
Just say als het niks is... het moeten lyrics voorstellen;
(ja, mijn engels blijft slecht)
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My Side

Oh yeah, and i know i love you.
Oh oh Yeah, i'm sure i realy love you.
Can you promise, to be on my side forever.
Will you promise, that it will be ok.
Can i trust you, that you will never leave again.
Will you trust me, that i always being on your side.

Please

Now, the day has come,
Your leaving now.
Now, get the stuff you need,
I've got letter, oh please read!
Becouse i need you so,
And you cant leave me here behind.
Becouse i need you, and i will mis you,
Please what did we do so wrong.
Oh Please, cant we even talk, about this.
Oh Please, i realy want you back,
Oh Please, are you realy leaving now.

The Desert

Here, i'm walking down the streets,
Somewhere in the middle of nowhere.
I'm trying to finding the way back.
Like i am, in the Great Sahara.
And i cant find the way,
Where should i go.

Here, i'm walking through the shops,
Somewhere in the middle of nowhere.
I'm trying to find the way back.
Like i am, in a Great Desert.
Where should i go.

The Way is too far, to go,
Should i give up now, Should i leave,
Becouse i cant live without you,
Shall i leave this planet forever?
Where should i go.

I Know

I dont understand, even the rest of Earth,
I dont understand, even my grandma too.
I want to know, what the Earth is made for.
I want to know, why i'm here to live.
But i know, i'm a unic person at Earth,
But i know, that i love you so.
So i know, that so long we live,
We're living togheter.

[tacidvs]

Dicht in je MoerstaaL

Je zegt t zelf, je engels is slecht. Waarom dan proberen iets origineels/kunstzinnigs te doen met een taal die je niet eens beheerst? Het klinkt misschien erg hard, maar verbeter eerst je engels eens flink, en dan is schrijven een goede manier, maar verwacht niet dat mensen het leuk/goed vinden.
Dit was veel te cliché, en ook nog eens flink (te) kort voor volledige lyrics.

Ik zal je fouten eruit halen:

My Side

Oh yeah, and I know I love you.
Oh oh Yeah, I'm sure I really love you.
Can you promise, to be on my side forever.
'To be on someone's side' dat is een bondgenoot, wat jij denk ik bedoelt is 'To be by my side'
Will you promise, that it will be ok.
Can I trust you, that you will never leave again.
Will you trust me, that I always being on your side.
Deze laatste zin is grammaticaal fout. Suggestie: "Will you trust me, that I will always be on your side"


Please
Now, the day has come,
You're leaving now.
Now, get the stuff you need,
I've got letter, oh please read!
Because I need you so,
And you can't leave me here behind.
Because I need you, and I will miss you,
Please what did we do so wrong.
Oh Please, can't we even talk, about this.
Oh Please, I really want you back,
Oh Please, are you really leaving now.


The Desert

Here, I'm walking down the streets,
Somewhere in the middle of nowhere.
I'm trying to find the way back.
Like I am, in the Great Sahara.
And I can't find the way,
Where should I go.

Here, I'm walking through the shops,
Somewhere in the middle of nowhere.
I'm trying to find the way back.
Like I am, in a Great Desert.
Where should i go.

The Way is too far, to go,
In de engelse taal bestaat de uitdrukking "de weg is te lang/ver om te gaan" niet... nog eens naar kijken zou ik zeggen
Should I give up now, Should I leave,
Because I can't live without you,
Shall I leave this planet forever?
Where should I go.


I Know

I don't understand, even the rest of Earth,
"even" betekent "zelfs", dus je zegt hier: 'Ik begrijp het niet, zelfs de rest van de aarde'. Klinkt nogal vreemd...
I don't understand, even my grandma too.
I want to know, what the Earth is made for.
I want to know, why I'm here to live.
But I know, I'm a unique person at Earth,
"at Earth" zou denk ik "on Earth" moeten zijn
But I know, that I love you so.
So I know, that so long we live,
We're living together.