26-07-2002, 17:48
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the ideas
the thoughts wish they'd leave but there not.. I can't help it can't resist feel like shit making a fist (vuist: fout gespeld?) I feel like this and I feel like that I just want it to stop while im taking a bath I hate it I do while im calling you I feel it for ever its not like im clever I just feel this power this ideas inside while im taking a shower ow I wish I could hide but I show them every day while im just on my way to the supermarket or in the car while I dont know where they are they make me feel like a young silly girl with a twist in her brain some kind of twirl I dont know how they get there or where they're from they just seem to be there and they the come when they come please mensen, ik wil echt meningen horen!!!!! kuzzzzzzzz
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27-07-2002, 20:27
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der staan best wel wat fouten in de zinnen in het engels
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04-08-2002, 20:37
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nou thnx.....uhum..
 neeik weet dat er veel fouten instaan.. heb het in tien minuten geschreven dus kan kloppen jah.. thnx 
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04-08-2002, 20:39
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the ideas
the thoughts wish they'd leave but they're not.. I can't help it can't resist feel like shit making a fist (vuist: fout gespeld?) I feel like this and I feel like that I just want it to stop while im taking a bath I hate it, I do while im calling you I feel it for ever its not like im clever I just feel this power this ideas inside while im taking a shower ow I wish I could hide but I show them every day while im just on my way to the supermarket or in the car while I dont know where they are they make me feel like a young silly girl with a twist in her brain some kind of twirl I dont know how they get there or where they're from they just seem to be there and they come when they come zo al iets beter? heb paar foutjes eruit gehaald
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04-08-2002, 21:17
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Gedichten hoeven niet te rijmen...
im = I am - I'm
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10-08-2002, 14:18
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ik weet ik weet,
maar als je een gedicht schrijft, tenminste dat heb ik.. let ik daar niet op: ik schrijf en o het nou correct engels is of die ' dat interesseert mij niet .. toch thnx
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10-08-2002, 21:35
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Citaat:
Hm, Nederlands is anders ook niet makkelijk. N.B.:Bij gedichten spreken sommige mensen over regels. 't is dat je het weet 
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11-08-2002, 14:49
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thnx tacidvs !!!
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11-08-2002, 16:13
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Kunt u mij misschien een e-mailadres mailen?
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11-08-2002, 19:08
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beetje simpel, maar het heeft toch wel wat. niet een alledaags onderwerp, en mooi verwoord wel.
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15-08-2002, 16:57
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thnx mate..
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