mijn gedichie hahaha

[tupac_4evah]

You really made me smile
Even it was only for a wile
Cause I know right from the start
That their would come day
You would break my heart
Never say a girl you love her
When you really don’t
Don’t say you want to be with her
When you really wont
Cause that was what you did
You’ve stolen my heart
And than you’ve broken it
But you can’t make me longer cry
I will survive without you
Cause thug people don’t die…

[tupac_4evah]

me iz bezig met n rhyme... maar het lukt echt niet mang.. meningen over het begin aub....

I will make you see
That you can’t f#ck me
What I gonna do
Really hurts
I will kill you
With this dope words
I will fuck you good
Just the way it should
Cuz you thought I was a fool
But I ain’t
I’m not saint
I’m bad.. really bad
You pissed me of
I don’t know why
I will make you sad
I will make you cry
Don’t ever fuck with a thuglady
Cuz now I will make you feel alone
I will make you feel misery
Now you will wish
You had never knew me
And that you nevah fucked me
You think you’re a real mc
Haaah keep it real
You will never be
You’re nothing
You rhymes sounds like shit
So keep it
Baby I’m better than the rest
I am better than you
I am better than best
You told lies about my back
Because you really wack
I will not kill you
I will hurt you like
you feel death inside
you will lye awaka
you will not sleep at night
I will be your worst nightmare
But f#ck it
I don’t care
With me in da house
You better grab your spouse
You can better start the run
Cuz I will hurt you
4 da fun

[Margriet]

mooi...
wat een woede

[Ernst-Waldo]

De woede(/'agressie') komt goed naar voren. Er staan nog een paar typfoutjes in, maar afgezien van dat vind ik het mooie gedichten!

Vooral

I will not kill you
I will hurt you like
you feel death inside

vond ik inhoudelijk wel gaaf. - Totdat het mezelf overkomt natuurlijk.