Verhaaltje

She's standing there, right before me. Beautiful eyes, magic eyes. No escape when you look at those eyes. Wordless, she takes over your mind, controls you. Controls me. Wish I could escape sometimes, but yet she makes me feel like I'm... flying. Lost in toughts, lost in her mind.

I met her, and never forgot her. And I never will. I'll always remember her eyes. Lively eyes, always smiling. Most of the times. Sometimes, when she's sad, you just want to hug her. Kiss her. Make those eyes smile again.

But there's more than just looks. The way she acts, the way she moves, always gracefull. And her feelings, her heart full of love for everyone.
Yet I know she will never love me. I wish I could reach her, tell her my feelings. She would never understand. No one would.

But my mind keeps flashing back to those eyes. Green eyes, with sparks. Bright spots, that make her eyes live. And always smiling. Loving.

Girl, you don't have to love me.

Just remember me. Please?


Is beetje bagger, maar goed. Heb nog nooit zoiets geschreven. Zit wel te janken bij mijn toetsenbord, bah.. Ow well, never mind. Any tips? Reacties? Whatever? Kraak maar af mensen!

Ow shoot, moet eik bij K&L. Verplaats maar, indien behoefte daaraan. Sorrryz!!!!!!!!

Is ie zo slecht?

[Cinamon]

woow
*took my breath away*
ik weet niet echt wat ik hier op moet zeggen...
hmpf
once again beautiful...
honey, keep the faith!

*knuf*
xxx

[Jesse_For You]

Ik vind hem wel goed wel wat lang maar dat is niet erg..
Wees maar niet bang dat een gedicht niet goed is zolang het gevoel echt is, is tie altijd goed...

Jesse

Took your breath away? *grijnst/bloost*

Thenks voor jullie replys!