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Summary (138 words)
This article is about a soldier called Jason Chelsea. He is 19-years-old and he is concern about what awaited him when he reached Iraq. He can’t go out there and shoot at young childern. He doesn’t care what side they are on. He can’t do it.
In training, they were made to wrestle with dummies. And they were also told the might have to fight kids and that they might havo to shoot them because they were carrying suicide bombs. Within 48 hours of confessing his concerns to his family, he was dead after taking an overdose of painkillers and slashing his wrist. In a suicide note, the young soldier had said that he was ‘just a waste’.


Personal opinion (143 words)
I was very shocked when I read this article. A soldier who killed himself because he couldn’t shoot at young childern. There are a lot of soldier’s in the army who can’t cope with the circumstances in Iraq. Lots of soldier’s who fight in Iraq suffer from combat and physical stress. They started drinking or beat up themselves. And this is of course very sad. In this article parents tell about their children, that they started drinking and that the alcohol had destroyed there liver. That’s above the limit I think. People who can’t cope with the situation must send to home. I think the worst problem is that the soldiers er mentaal nog niet klaar voor zijn. Mine opinion is that people who wants in army must get a special test so that this problems, like suicide and alcoholism, belong to the past.

[June bug]

Summary (138 words)
This article is about a soldier called Jason Chelsea. He is 19-years-old and he is concerned about what awaits him when he reaches Iraq. He can’t go out there and shoot at young children . He doesn’t care what side they are on. He can’t do it.
In training, they had to wrestle with dummies. And they were also told they might have to fight kids and that they might have to shoot them because they were carrying suicide bombs. Within 48 hours of confessing his concerns to his family, he was dead after taking an overdose of painkillers and cutting? weet zo ff t precieze woord niet, wel iets met een s his wrist. In a suicide note, the young soldier had said that he was ‘just a waste’.


Personal opinion (143 words)
I was very shocked when I read this article. A soldier who killed himself because he couldn’t shoot at young children . There are a lot of soldiers in the army who can’t cope with the circumstances in Iraq. Lots of soldiers who fight in Iraq suffer from combat and physical stress. They started drinking or beat up themselves. And this is of course very sad. In this article parents tell about their children, that they started drinking and that the alcohol had destroyed their liver. That’s above the limit I think. People who can’t cope with the situation must be sent home. I think the worst problem is that the soldiers are not mentally ready yet. My opinion is that people who want to be in the army must get a special test so that these problems, like suicide and alcoholism, belong to the past.

Er zitten nog wel een aantal dingen in zoals tijden die niet helemaal kloppen, heb wel (volgens mij dan ) alle spelfouten eruit gehaald.

[MickeyV]

June bug schreef op 27-08-2006 @ 18:24 :
cutting? weet zo ff t precieze woord niet, wel iets met een s

to slit.

[Dinalfos]

Het kan uiteraard allebei.

[Stephani]

Normaal gebruik je in summaries toch geen afkortingen zoals don't? Ik zou er do not etc. van maken.

Stephani schreef op 27-08-2006 @ 20:44 :
Normaal gebruik je in summaries toch geen afkortingen zoals don't? Ik zou er do not etc. van maken.

Waarom zou je dat in een samenvatting niet gebruiken? Zo formeel is het toch niet