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Hallo,
Kan iemand kijken of mijn summary en opinion goed (grammaticaal) is?

bedankt



Summary (142 words)
This is an unbelievable article about a missing diver who had been given up for dead but who is still alive! Matthew Harvey had been diving near Fermain Bay when he went missing. But the 35-years-old man from Guernsey survived after more then 50 hours in the water without food. Matthew Harvey’s family had almost given up their hope but then, about 8pm, Matthews father Dan got a phone call. Someone told him that they thought they had been found his son. But because they weren’t sure if it was Matthew, he had to come to the hospital and identified that diver. It was Matthew!
After 50 hours in the water, his physical condition was quite good but he was still unable to communicate. An ambulance spokesman said that Matthew had a head injury, but it was not thought to be serious.

Personal opinion (144 words)
Can you imagine, 50 hours in the water? I can’t !!
What do you feel when you are there and you know that everyone is thinking you are dead?
No food, no contact and you can’t screamed for help. What are you doing during this horrible 50 hours? Try to escape I think, but to survive this you must be mentally very strong. You must fight for your life; you absolutely may not give up!
So I think Matthew Harvey was a very strong man. He did everything he could and remain hopeful; hope that someone would find him.
But I just can’t imagine how I would feel when I was there in the water for 50 hours.
I don’t know if I would do the same, if I keep my head up for so long. But maybe I had no choice then!

Summary (142 words)
This is an unbelievable article about a missing diver who had been given up for dead but who was still alive! Matthew Harvey had been diving near Fermain Bay when he went missing. But the 35-years-old man from Guernsey survived after more then 50 hours in the water without food. Matthew Harvey’s family had almost given up their hope but then, about 8pm, Matthews father Dan got a phone call. Someone told him that they thought they had found his son. But because they weren’t sure if it was Matthew, he had to come to the hospital and identify that diver. It was Matthew!
After 50 hours in the water, his physical condition was quite good but he was (waarom gebruik je hier still?!) unable to communicate. An ambulance spokesman said that Matthew had a head injury, but it was not thought to be serious.

Personal opinion (144 words)
Can you imagine, 50 hours in the water? I can’t !!
What do you feel when you are there and you know that everyone is thinking you are dead?
No food, no contact and you can’t scream for help. What are you doing during these horrible 50 hours? Try to escape, I think, but to survive this you must be mentally very strong. You must fight for your life; you absolutely may not give up!
So I think Matthew Harvey was a very strong man. He did everything he could and remain hopeful; he hoped that someone would find him.
But I just can’t imagine how I would feel when I was there in the water for 50 hours.
I don’t know if I would do the same, if I keep my head up for so long. But maybe I had no choice then!

Ik heb jouw stijl gelaten zoals hij is, alleen grammaticale foutjes aangepast.

[sten-vvv]

Nog één keer een korte samenvatting en opinion.

Thanks!!

Summary (122 words)
This is an interesting article about the former princess from England: Diana.
Princess Diana died on August 31, 1997 when their Mercedes crashed in the Pont d’Alma tunnel in Paris.
Many people travel every year to London to remember her. So this year it was for the 9th time that people commemorate her.
There are a lot of speculations about her dead. How she died. Most people in England (and also over the whole world) think that their driver had drunken to much and that he lose the control of the car. But the thruth we would never come to know.

Next year there will be held a special memorial to mark the 10th anniversary of the moment on August 31, 1997.


Personal opinion (120 words)
Princess Diana, a woman who I can remember as a cheerful, dear person.
She died when I was 8-years-old. I can remember that I heard from this accident on the television. But I was 8-years-old so I looked to the news with my dad but after five minutes I was it already forgotten. But now, nine years later, it attracs me more then I thought. When I read this article I feel a little bit faint. Of course this was world news TOENDERTIJD but I think it’s wonderful that nine years later people still commemorate her.
I hope that there will be a fantastic memorial next year so that she smile in heaven!

Dat kan best in één topic. Ik heb ze samengevoegd.

Summary (122 words)
This is an interesting article about the former princess of England: Diana.
Princess Diana died on August 31, 1997 when her Mercedes crashed in the Pont d’Alma tunnel in Paris.
Every year many people travel to London to remember her. So this year it was for the 9th time that people commemorated her.
There are a lot of speculations about her death/about the way she died (kies een van die twee) Most people in England (and also in the rest of the world) think that her driver had drunk to drink - drank - drunk!! too much and that he lost the control of the car. But we would never come to know the truth .

Next year there will be a special memorial to mark the 10th anniversary of her death.


Personal opinion (120 words)
Princess Diana, a woman who I can remember as a cheerful, dear person, died when I was 8 years old. I can remember that I heard from this accident on the television. But I was 8 years old so I looked to the news with my dad, after five minutes I had already forgotten. But now, nine years later, it attracts dat is raar, 'attracts' vind ik meer positief, je bedoelt dat het je meer aangrijpt? dan zou ik zeggen 'it moved me more than I thought' me more than I thought. When I read this article I felt a little bit faint. Of course this was world news back then of: in 1997, bijvoorbeeld, but I think it’s wonderful that nine years later people still commemorate her.
I hope that there will be a fantastic memorial next year so that she can smile in heaven!

Wederom heb ik je stijl 't zelfde gelaten en alleen grammaticale dingen veranderd. Sommige dingen moet je nog zelf even bekijken, zie daarvoor mijn cursieve commentaar.