The step

[AngelLena]

I’m sick of it all
I’m tiered and I’m sad
The way out seems so easy
But it’s so difficult to take the step

The step towards freedom
The step towards enlightenment
The step towards happiness
The impossible step

Leave all things behind
Forget everything that’s happened
Give up on everything
Let it all be

All the people I’ve loved and love
Forget them and move on
Not letting anyone near me
To prevent the pain of knowing

All the places I remember
Get them out of my memories
Don’t visit anything anymore
To prevent painful memories

Stop everything I’m working on
Just stop and don’t think about it
Prevent bad things to happen
Because pain hurts so much

But what do I want
Do I want to be alone forever
To prevent the pain of losing
And receive the pain of loneliness

Or am I willing to face everything
Just to prevent loneliness
And go through pain again
Break myself again

I want to live, but what does it mean
In my eyes it means pain
In my eyes it means fear
But is death even worse

The step towards freedom
The step towards enlightenment
The step towards happiness
Seems so far away

[fruitmand]

Ik vind hem wel heel erg mooi! Alleen ik vind dat je bepaalde woorden te veel herhaald (prevent vooral!!!) en dat maakt het gedicht wat vermoeiender en irritant om te lezen! Voor de rest, wel mooi. Alleen een beetje triest! Hopelijk niet je eigen gevoelens...

[AngelLena]

Nou....eigenlijk wel. Maar het boeit me nu allemaal niet zo veel meer. Heb me er overheen gezet. Maar alsnog bedankt, zal je commentaar onthouden.

xxx Angel