Songtext: some good advice

[Secreet]

Everybody has this opinion,
about the way I live my life.
Wel it is my decision,
I went my head and cry.
I don't need your true
religion, I don't need any lies.
I don't have to listen to this
healthy advice.

Everybody has something to say,
But never walked my way.
And I don't need any good words,
to make me stay.
I don't need any real experience,
I wanna make my own mistakes.
And mabey I turn out the same way,
just let me walk my way.

I don't need your true religion,
I don't need your good advice.
I might turn out broken and poor,
But I wanna live my life.
And mabey some day I'll make you see,
That I'm not the one who you thought me to be.

Everybody has something to say,
about the way I lived my life.
Well I can only say this to them,
why did you took that advice?
I might been crazy, I might have been wrong,
But I'm happy because I was wrong.
Mabey it's not sound perfect to you,
but I was, who I wanted to be.

I don't need your true religion,
I don't need your good advice.
I might turn out broken and poor,
But I wanna live my life.
And mabey some day I'll make you see,
That I'm not the one who you thought me to be.


Het is nog niet helemaal af en moet nog wat veranderd worden...


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Ik wil Era terug (had ik er net 400+ posts mee, issie geband) Ik hou van iedereen, Xje, Speklap is my miss universe, I love you

[Dit bericht is aangepast door Secreet (26-11-2001).]

[Caatje]

Hijs mooi! Heel herkenbaar!

Alleen in de eerste strofe, ik neem aan dat je in de 6e regels 'leugens' bedoelt. Dat is 'lies'!

En de regel "Mabey it's not sound perfect to you" vind ik niet lekker lezen, zou misschien eerder "Maybe it does not sound perfect to you" schrijven...

Maar das mijn mening...

Liefs,
Caroline

[Secreet]

Caatje schreef:


En de regel "Mabey it's not sound perfect to you" vind ik niet lekker lezen, zou misschien eerder "Maybe it does not sound perfect to you" schrijven...

Dat zingt niet
Had ik eerst ook staan, maar dat is te moeilijk om in de maat te zingen...

[Caatje]

Secreet schreef:
Dat zingt niet
Had ik eerst ook staan, maar dat is te moeilijk om in de maat te zingen...

Hm, lastig, want zo is het gewoon foutief gebruik van Engels en dat vind ik persoonlijk nogal slordig...

Enne, het is echt 'Maybe', i.p.v. Mabey...

Liefs,
Caroline

[kaleidoscope]

Kvinnum koel...alleen idd. die ene zin die klopt gewoon niet en ookal zingt ie wel lekker ik zou hem toch veranderen,eruit halen ofsoow..want diez in verpest het geheel een beetje...
Maar ik vinnum wel mooi!