The one I love even more then myself...

[Gothic]

You know, I’m still waiting for you to start talking,
Have you ever thought about telling me?
Well I know you think the same thing,
Is it so hard to say something we both see?

Some way it is funny, you and me, both afraid,
To say the thing we have known our whole life,
It’s no secret, for noone, everybody knows,
You’re my friend, and some day, I’ll be your wife.

You and me rule the world, we always did,
Ok we started at school, having fun,
Competing against each other, we were close,
But somehow, I don’t like to admit, you always won.

Too bad there’s that distance between us,
But one phonecall and you are back in my head,
Talking like you and me do, it’s Paul and Karen again,
We know each other’s thoughts, you know when I’m sad.

In a few weeks, we meet again, will you tell me then?
The sparks were always there, and the friendship too,
Will we talk like always? And will there be our first kiss?
We’ve waited too long, denying our feelings for each other,
Because you moved, there is so much we daily miss,
Stupid boy, I love you more then myself,
So you tell me what you feel, or should I tell what I feel,
Otherwise we go on behaving like we always did,
Soulmates, and some weird friendship,
Well that was always fun too, wasn’t it?

[edit] Secreet had goede opmerking voor aanpassing [/edit]

[Morphia]

Ik word er helemaal warm en stil van... Je hebt het echt goed gedaan.

[Secreet]

Idd erg goed geschreven..ik heb alleen wel een opmerking over het eerste stukje...

Gothic schreef:
You know, I’m still waiting for you to start talking,
Have you ever thinked about telling me?
Well I think you think the same thing,
Is it so hard to say something we both see?

Have you ever thinked moet denk ik zijn have you ever thought of have you ever been thinking

En 2x think in 1 zin leest erg moeilijk weg, maar is verder geen ramp

[Gothic]

Secreet schreef:
Idd erg goed geschreven..ik heb alleen wel een opmerking over het eerste stukje...





Have you ever thinked moet denk ik zijn have you ever thought of have you ever been thinking

En 2x think in 1 zin leest erg moeilijk weg, maar is verder geen ramp

Je hebt helemaal gelijk ... Ik heb het ook aangepast...

[I love floris]

poeh zeg..je word er echt stil van!