choices.....

[maffevis]

HALLLLOOOOWA....!!!

Beste luitjes, ik presenteer hierbij.... een verhaal (YAYNESS!!)! Dit verhaal heb ik geschreven toen ik boos was en heb dus lekker snel weggeschreven, dus let aub niet op n taalfoutje. T is BS maar let me know what u think!!!

why won't somebody help me!!!! help me goddamnit, im stuck in this godawfull place. altough i'm not sure what it is. It could be....
i don't know, just... i don't know. whatever it is. it isn't home.
it's cold but yet... warm. warm like when you step into an iglo. cold
like when step out of a sauna in the summer. So... undefinable. Is it? I'm screaming but words won't leave my mouth, no matter to transport my voice. No air to make me breath. but yet, i am alive, or am i? I feel a pounding coming, i can smell the colors, red and white. left and right. can't tell whats real or not. Am i.... dead? Could be, wherever i am.. i don't wanna be here, i want to rest. I'm hearing something coming closer though. odd. weird, strange. a voice. "it is not your time to go." a booming bass filled voice says. who is he? "WHO ARE YOU?" I ask. "It is not your time to find out yet". what can i say to that...? i see a light, tunnely?whats at the end of the tunnel? I wish they'd turn that goddamn light off!! can't see a fucking thing. i guess i don't have a choice, lets go the the bright light, it's the only thing i see. I must be dead, that sandwich was a bit suspicious! But that light... questions, questions, questions... and questions ofcourse. where will it lead me? Heaven, Earth? who knows? GOD? Am i becoming a believer? I am reaching the end. the end of the tunnel. It's getting warmer, my body starts to tingle. I can feel a suction of some sort, this isn't good! but hey what can i do. the suction is getting stronger and stronger, i see forms and shapes of some sort. 9 lights? is it a sign?? NO!!! YOU ARE LYING ON AN OPERATING TABLE, A KNIFE OPENS UP YOUR STOMACHE. THEY PULL OUT A SANDWICH!!! WHAT THE FUCK, IS THAT EVEN REMOTELY POSSIBLE? I guess these things happen. American medicine today : tunnel of light is scientifically explainable. When you die, your senses get turned off. And when your revived your senses start to work again, and because your eyes need to adapt to the amount of light you will see a very bright light which could resemble the vision of a tunnel.
holy shit! it was all a lie! So now the big question is... where is this world coming to? goddless you might say? I dunno, all i know is what i saw. and i have yet to find out... if it's all an illusion or if there's really something out there. Whichever way, we need to
make choices. choices, choices... choices. Small ones that lead to big inevitable ones that you'd like to avoid. i am here now, and all i know is that the day i die, i want to be able to say that i led
a good life, and made the right choices. choices.....

The end (or is it? )

[thomaske]

Waarom dat Engels?
Cool ofzo

[Greenpeacegirl]

heftig!!!

ik vind je schrijfstijl echt heeeel erg goed
en je kunt wel echt merken dat je hier goed kwaad was zeg

[maffevis]

Dank je wel! Leuk om te horen dat iemand m'n verhaaltje leuk vind :-) de eerste!

[Greenpeacegirl]

maffevis schreef op 10-02-2004 @ 00:53:
Dank je wel! Leuk om te horen dat iemand m'n verhaaltje leuk vind :-) de eerste!

als er zo weinig reactie is hier dan zullen wel niet veel mensen t gelezen hebben, denk ik

maar misschien lezen mensen dingen sneller als ze in t nederlands geschreven zijn... (ik zelf ook hoor)

[Reynaert]

Greenpeacegirl schreef op 10-02-2004 @ 23:48:
als er zo weinig reactie is hier dan zullen wel niet veel mensen t gelezen hebben, denk ik

Of ze vinden het niet de moeite waard om te reageren. Dat kan natuurlijk ook.

[Greenpeacegirl]

Renard schreef op 11-02-2004 @ 00:04:
Of ze vinden het niet de moeite waard om te reageren. Dat kan natuurlijk ook.

tjonge en deze reactie is wel heel erg de moeite waard ofzo

Greenpeacegirl schreef op 19-02-2004 @ 23:19:
tjonge en deze reactie is wel heel erg de moeite waard ofzo

... waarmee Renard bedoelt dat hij het niks vond, waarschijnlijk.

Nooit een verhaal posten met zoveel spelfouten en ... als deze, ik heb de eerste regel gelezen en ben ermee opgehouden.