Never Get You Back..

[2Stripes]

Ik Ben Hier Nieuw..Het Zag Er Allemaal Heel Gezellig Uit..dus Ik Denk..Ik Meld Me Ff Aan..Be Nice To Me..


The tears that i'm crying are the pieces of my broken heart
It kind of feels i'm slowly dying ever since we've been apart
You got up and took your bags..to put all your stuff inside..
Along with that..you took my life my love and my sence of pride..
You closed the door behind you..to never be opened by you again
I didnt wanted to end this way..all i wanted was for you to understand
That i didnt deserved to be treated..the way you were doing all along
Spending my days crying..and thinking about where it went wrong
I'm not able to let go of you..I wonder where you are..
Praying your'e not with another chick..how did it ever got this far?
Now that i will never speak to you again..there's some things that i regret..
I'm sorry that the words "i hate you" were the last ones that i said
I wish i could say i'm better of without you..but that would be a lie
Sitting on the couch doing nothing..nothing else than wondering why
Why was i such a drama queen?? why didnt i try harder to make it better??
Why was i so impatient?? had i give you more time,would we still be together??
Ever since the day you left my life..the pages in my book have been black
It's tearing me up to be confronted with the truth..that i will never get you back

2Stripes schreef op 16-08-2004 @ 12:40 :
[...] Be Nice To Me..

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