[songtekst] This little thing

[Dark-Wings]

I see her walking on the path
See gives me a little smile
My heart is flooding with warmth
And I feel me good when I see her

But the path we are walking on
Is the path that never stops
We are just walking around here
And we stop the feelings we feel

Please, give us a little thing
A little thing called Love
Oh please, we need Love so hard
And no, don’t leave us alone

We are still standing on the path
And staring at the sun today
The sun who make us smile
But ones in a while we will cry

It’s a girl with a heart of gold
Her beautiful voice can make me smile
When I was down and wanted to die
I only needed her to stay

Please, give us a little thing
A little thing called Love
Oh please, we need Love so hard
And no, don’t leave us alone

I am sitting on the ground
And I feel her warmth
She is standing next to me
And she begins to talk a lot

Now we are the best friends ever
And we never feel so down anymore
Our life is new and beautiful
And we love to be here on earth

Please, give us a little thing
A little thing called Love
Oh please, we need Love so hard
And no, don’t leave us alone

At one day we look to the sky
And we feel a lot of things
Then we feel something in our heart
And we know someone has give us Love

Now we can feel the thing
The thing we had lost with tears
We never have to cry again
Now we can give each other Love

Thank you for the little thing
The little thing called Love
We will never lose this thing
And no, don’t take it off

Please, don’t take it off
Our little thing called Love
We wants this thing so hard
And no, don’t take it off

Our little thing called Love
Thank you for this little thing
No, don’t take it off from us
Don’t take it off....

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Het is maar een probeerseltje duz misschien nie echt goed maja

[Dark-Wings]

waarom reageert er niemand plz geef ff je mening want dan weet ik of het iets is of niet

[prulleke]

Ik wil niet zeuren, maar bekijk de spelling nog eens....op zich wel een goed thema, liefde/verliefdheid/eenzaamheid doet het altijd goed. Maar denk er eens over na wat je precies over wil brengen. Ik was na het lezen niet lyrisch enthousiast en eigenlijk nog niet. Misschien kun je een verbeterde versie nog eens plaatsen?