Brief. engels

[Dreamgraphix.]

Vandaag moet ik een brief voor engels maken in de les... maar je mocht het voorbereiden. Nu heb ik een vraag aan jullie of er volgens jullie dingen verbeterd moeten worden.. dus kijk maar ff




Merodeplein 8
5021GH Tilburg
The Netherlands

2nd november 2003


Dear Parmjit,

I read you letter, it's a pitty your friends bully you at school. These things like making jokes about your origin exists everywhere, also in Holland. Some people get bullied because they have another culture, skin colour or their apparel is different from the casual.
The real problem is that you have to stand up for yourself, which you don't, even if you think that your friends don't mean to be nasty to you.
If they are your true friends you can say everything to them, without they're thinking your to serious or that you don't like them.
Eatherway you should try it and if you don't know what to do, try asking the other Asians what they do when they get bullied.

Kind regards,

Kelvin Mitchell


alvast bedankt!

[Scatterbrain]

Dreamgraphix. schreef op 03-11-2003 @ 11:44:
Vandaag moet ik een brief voor engels maken in de les... maar je mocht het voorbereiden. Nu heb ik een vraag aan jullie of er volgens jullie dingen verbeterd moeten worden.. dus kijk maar ff




Merodeplein 8
5021GH Tilburg
The Netherlands

2nd november 2003


Dear Parmjit,

I read you letter, it's a pitty your friends bully you at school. These things like making jokes about your origin exists (--> exist) everywhere, also in Holland. Some people get bullied because they have another culture, skin colour or their apparel is different from the casual.
The real problem is that you have to stand up for yourself, which you don't (--> you're not (weet niet zeker)), even if you think that your friends don't mean to be nasty to you.
If they are your true friends you can say everything to them, without they're (--> them (volgens mij)) thinking your (you're) to (--> too) serious or that you don't like them.
Eatherway you should try it and if you don't know what to do, try asking the other Asians what they do when they get bullied.

Kind regards,

Kelvin Mitchell


alvast bedankt!

Ik heb even gauw een paar dingetjes verbeterd, maar misschien dat er nog meer fouten inzitten, maar die moet iemand anders er maar uit halen.. succes!

[Gatara]

Hey, dat lijkt verdacht veel op:
http://forum.scholieren.com/showthre...hreadid=649257

[Gatara]

Dreamgraphix. schreef op 03-11-2003 @ 11:44:

2nd november 2003

Moet zijn:
2nd of November 2003

[Konijn]

Dreamgraphix. schreef op 03-11-2003 @ 11:44:

Merodeplein 8
5021GH Tilburg
The Netherlands

2nd of november 2003


Dear Parmjit,

I read your letter, it's a pity your friends bully you at school. These things like making jokes about your origin exist everywhere, also in Holland. Some people get bullied because they have another culture, skin colour or because their apparel is different from the casual.
The real problem is that you have to stand up for yourself, which you don't, even if you think that your friends don't mean to be nasty to you.
If they are your true friends you can say everything to them, without them thinking you're too serious or that you don't like them.
Eatherway you should try it and if you don't know what to do, try asking the other Asians what they do when they get bullied.

Kind regards,

Kelvin Mitchell

Apparel kent mijn woordenboek niet, en ik weet neit wat t betekent dus kan je geen vervanger geven, misschien is t ook wel goed.
En eatherway lijkt me niet goed zo, ik weet alleen niet hoe t wel moet. Anyway kan wel, maar verandert de betekenis.

[Gatara]

Konijn schreef op 03-11-2003 @ 14:48:
Apparel kent mijn woordenboek niet, en ik weet neit wat t betekent dus kan je geen vervanger geven, misschien is t ook wel goed.

Is ok

En eatherway lijkt me niet goed zo, ik weet alleen niet hoe t wel moet. Anyway kan wel, maar verandert de betekenis.

Either way

[The Ox]

Ik zal er ook es even mee spelen

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Merodeplein 8
5021 GH Tilburg
The Netherlands

November 2, 2003
2nd of November 2003

maanden moeten altijd met een hoofdletter

Dear Parmjit,

I read your letter. I think it isa pity your friends bully you at school. These things, like making jokes about your origin, exist everywhere, in Holland as well. Some people get bullied because they have another cultural background, skin colour or because their apparel is different from the casual.
The real problem is that you have to stand up for yourself, which you don't, even if you think that your friends don't mean to be nasty to you.
If they are your true friends you can say everything to them, without them thinking you're too serious or that you don't like them.

Eatherway (wat bedoel je ? "Anyway" = nou ja..., of "either way": beide mogelijkheden... )

Anyway, you should try it and if you don't know what to do, try asking other Asians what they do when they get bullied.

Kind regards,

Kelvin Mitchell

they have another cultural background klopt ideomatisch niet, je kan wel zeggen dat ze van een andere achtergrond zijn
they're from an other culture...
(cultural background is dubbelop)

[A loved one]

Niet Holland, maar 'The Netherlands'!