nakijken engelse zinnen

Ik heb twee samenvattingen gemaakt van twee korte engelse teksten, zou iemand die voor mij kunnen nakijken op spelling of grammatica fouten?


Because of advances in CGI is recreating comic book characters on the big screen possible and causes them to make a common appearance. Making the past en the coming decades to be the golden age of comic book movies.

The video of Ok Go is extraordinary because of the mechanical toy being the star and because it opens with a balding man who triggers a chain reaction by running into a row of dominoes.

lisahaan schreef:

Ik heb twee samenvattingen gemaakt van twee korte engelse teksten, zou iemand die voor mij kunnen nakijken op spelling of grammatica fouten?

ik heb de eerste zin aangepast!

Because of advances in CGI is it possible to make the comic book characters looks more realistic on screen causing the to make a common appearance. Making the past en coming decade the golden age of comic book movies.

The video of Ok Go is extraordinary because of the mechanical toy being the star and because it opens with a balding man who triggers a chain reaction by running into a row of dominoes.

[DAH]

lisahaan schreef:

Because of advances in CGI is recreating comic book characters on the big screen possible [and that/which] causes them to make a common appearance, making the past and the coming decades to be the golden age of comic book movies.

The video of Ok Go is extraordinary because of the mechanical toy being the star and because it opens with a balding man who triggers a chain reaction by running into a row of dominoes.

[ThomasJu]

lisahaan schreef:

Because of advances in CGI is recreating comic book characters on the big screen possible and causes them to make a common appearance. .

Ik moest deze zin echt even goed bekijken. (Hij is goed, maar als je snel leest wordt hij vaag)

Dit komt omdat het thema pas ver in de zin voorkomt. persoonlijk zou ik dit omdraaien.

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Recreating comic book characters on the big screen is possible because of advances in CGI. This causes...