Mrs. Pain

[prulleke]

The name is Pain
Mrs. Pain for you actually
I'm glad we meet at last
takes less time normaly

waited like a million years
for this moment to arrive
and now that it has come
I will ruin you whole life

You used to think you knew me
am I gonna show you're wrong!
I will hurt you
Maybe I allready waited to long

People used to say
you hurt the ones you love
luckely for you it is the other way
around, I love the ones I hurt....

[Type]

tip 1: gooi het eens door de spellcheck van Word ofzo...

[Evito]

De spelling is niet geweldig
maar het gedicht op zich is echt leuK!

[candlerose]

Just for the little type-O's it's got a little name called: CUTE.
And I mean that in the worst possible way. Thank you!
Though I most doubtfully think that the way you were writing was autobiographic. So that's not a relieve.
The best to you,my dear.
As for the rest of us, I have my serious doubts. Allthough I must say the last verse is a lot more interesting.

[prulleke]

ja, sorry voor de spelling!
Genoeg excuses, maar daar zitten jullie ook vast niet op te wachten.
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